Seven Steeples by Sara Baume

Like Yiyun Li, whose beguiling novel The Book of Goose I wrote about in January, Sara Baume has been on my radar for a few years, ever since the publication of her 2015 debut Spill Simmer Falter Wither to very positive reviews. Baume was born in Lancashire but grew up in County Cork – and it’s Ireland which forms the setting for her latest novel, Seven Steeples, recently longlisted for the Dylan Thomas Prize, an award dedicated to celebrating the creative talent of young writers worldwide. It’s a quiet, contemplative book – a beautifully-crafted story of withdrawal from conventional society for the peace of a minimalist existence. Alongside this central theme, the novel has much to say about the natural erosion that occurs over time, from the decay of buildings and possessions to the dwindling of human contact and relationships.

There is very little conventional action or plot here (too little for some readers, I suspect). Instead, Seven Steeples revolves around Sigh (Simon) and Bell (Isobel), ‘two solitary misanthropes’ who decide to dissociate themselves from their former lives, leaving their unfulfilling jobs and tenuous family connections to live together in a remote rented house by the Irish coast. The building – which has existed for seven decades, one of many significant ‘sevens’ in the book – sits in the shadow of a low mountain, an ever-watchful presence that looms large in Baume’s story.

Accompanied by their dogs, Voss, a ‘spry and devious’ terrier, and Pip, ‘a hulking, dull-witted’ lurcher, Sigh and Bell aim to share a simple existence, getting by on a combination of welfare payments and their meagre savings, far away from the bustle of the city. There is no romantic or sexual attraction here, simply a shared desire for a different way of life. Both have made the conscious decision to lose touch with their families and create a new one of their own, complete with Voss and Pip.

…they had each in their separate large families been persistently, though not unkindly, overlooked, and this had planted in Bell and in Sigh the amorphous idea that the only appropriate trajectory of a life was to leave as little trace as possible and incrementally disappear. (p. 18)

The novel follows Sigh, Bell and their dogs over seven years, capturing their regular practices and routines. Both individuals are creatures of habit, walking the same route every evening, paying close attention to any slight changes from the previous day. There is a simplicity and quiet beauty to their rituals, the daily walks with and without the dogs, weekly trips to the shops, and occasional interactions with a nearby farmer whose presence they find reassuring without feeling overly intrusive.

Over the seven years, the novel also captures the changing seasons, beginning in January in year one and moving through to December by year seven. There is some exquisite, poetic writing about the natural world here – often quite unusual in style, such as this description of a sycamore tree bursting into life in the midst of June.

The mess of twisted, whiskered limbs exploded against the horizon. Its profile went from a line drawing to a watercolour, from spiked and tapping to fluffed and murmuring. (p. 108)

Alongside the turning of the seasons, the weather often affects the couple’s days, guiding their rhythms to a certain extent. As I mentioned above, the writing is beautiful – full of vivid imagery, frequently expressed in a language of its own. 

Weather systems arrived from the Atlantic and raced across their valley of sky. There was a vacillating rainbow, a paroxysm of wind, a spasmodic shower of hail. And then, the next day, there was an unbroken traffic jam of low-slung cloud backed up between the sea and the mountain, ironing the panorama away, moulting fine rain. (p. 43)

As the months and years slip by, Bell and Sigh gradually let the house fester and crumble around them. Crockery and glasses break, cutlery and utensils are lost, various appliances wear out or break down, the building itself degrades further. There is a palpable sense of erosion here, a steady decline that feels inevitable as it progresses. Yet, in pursuit of their isolated existence, with an unwillingness to ask for help or favours for fear of owing something in return, Bell and Sigh simply allow the house and its contents to degrade, continuing their natural trajectories of decay.

They had imagined, in the beginning, that if everything they owned was old and shoddy, even ugly, certainly nearing the end of its useful life, then they would better be able to bear its loss. (p. 163)

Occasionally, they debate whether to replace something that has broken down or been lost, typically without reaching an agreement – consequently, nothing gets done. Over the years, the detritus gradually piles up, a heady mix of particles of dust, hair, sand, dirt, pine needles, bodily fluids, flies, spiders, moths, mouse droppings and general clutter. There are cursory attempts to tidy up now and again, but these are superficial at best.

There was a bottomless supply of hair that flowed from the dogs, and dust from the ash that flowed from the fire, and they had combined – the dog hair and ash dust – into a new kind of matter, sticky, quilted. (p. 213)

From time to time, they discuss the remnants of family they have left behind, back in their former solitary lives, wondering aloud whether to contact them again, even if it means confronting the embarrassment of having allowed these relationships to slide. Nevertheless, the dilemma is inevitably settled by a lack of action, Bell and Sigh’s default mode when faced with situations where decisions are required.

They are scathing about the owners of holiday cottages, people who possess hundreds of things they rarely use, often with duplicates in their second homes. There are subtle references to environmental changes too, from the wildness of the weather to the increasing pressures of farming, with Baume eschewing idyllic imagery for the realities of rural life.

While the house is virtually a character in its own right, replete with a multitude of sounds, sights and smells, Bell and Sigh remain somewhat oblique and elusive – a little hard to pin down. At first, they seem quite different from one another, each with their own distinctive characteristics and habits; Bell, for instance, is the quicker of the two to anger, while Sigh has a seemingly endless ‘capacity for regret’. Over time, however, their personalities become increasingly similar, to the point where they even begin to resemble one another in physical appearance and dress as their clothes are pooled together.  

Year after year, the mountain remains unclimbed, despite the pair’s initial intentions to tackle it one day. Finally, in their eighth year, they decide to climb it, revealing a poignant reflection that illuminates the rest of the book. Like Jessica Au’s meditative novella Cold Enough for Snow, Seven Steeples closes with the mention of something significant, a revelation of sorts that may prompt readers to question the true nature of the situation they see before them. It’s a clever, melancholy ending, likely to send some readers back to the novel’s early chapters, eager to revisit specific aspects of the text.

In summary, Seven Steeples is a subtle, elegantly structured story of withdrawal from conventional society, the rejection of consumerism and wider societal networks in favour of a minimalist life.  Alongside this central theme, the novel depicts the natural erosion that occurs over time, from the decay of buildings and possessions to the dwindling of human contact and relationships. In truth, it’s a book I liked and admired rather than loved, but there’s no denying the beauty of Baume’s prose, especially when portraying the natural world. The book slips effortlessly between prose and a form of poetry, with the layout of words on the page reflecting something of the novel’s rhythm and recurring themes. A very accomplished book that will lend itself to different interpretations, especially towards the end.

Seven Steeples is published by Tramp Press; personal copy

31 thoughts on “Seven Steeples by Sara Baume

  1. gertloveday

    I just loved ‘spill simmer falter wither’ and it sounds as if there are some similarities but that first book was focussed on the need for human warmth and human connection, so this seems to be going in a different direction.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Oh, cool. I’ll take a closer look at that one. She writes beautifully here, especially in the depictions of the natural world, so I’d definitely be open to reading another – probably not in the short term, but maybe later this year.

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  2. MarinaSofia

    Might be a bit of a difficult read for me as my own house and garden fall to ruin around me 🤣🤣 Seriously, it sounds like the appeal of a book like this depends so much on the quality of the writing and whether the symbolism is not too heavy-handed.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      The writing is excellent – quite poetic in style, which I think you’d appreciate. (It really is exquisitely written!) Good point about the symbolism in this type of novel, but I think Baume handles that aspect pretty well. It doesn’t feel too clumsy or heavy-handed, although having said that, there are quite a few descriptions of grease, dog hair and other general detritus, which might not be to everyone’s tastes!

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  3. madamebibilophile

    This sounds so appealing. I really enjoyed SSFW and I want to revisit this author. I imagine the two characters are quite distancing for the reader, but I suppose this reflects their relationships in the story too.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Yes, it certainly reflects their relationship with the rest of society, a strong sense of wanting to retreat from the outside world as far as possible. I think you’d like this, Madame Bibi. It’s quiet, meditative and really beautifully written.

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  4. Janakay | YouMightAsWellRead

    Lovely review! Seven Steeples sounds like something I’d find quite appealing when I’m in the mood for a beautifully written, poetic story of unconventional relationships and life (I’m in this mood more often than one would think!). As I read your review, I found myself thinking of Marilynn Robinson’s Housekeeping. Although the two novels are quite different (Robinson’s centers on a family of strong & unconventional women, so a feminist interpretation is somewhat inevitable), both novels seem to share (I haven’t read Steeples) a poetic and symbolist style and to center on characters with an unconventional (i.e., dismissive) approach to our family-centered, consumerist culture. Robinson’s characters, particularly the younger ones, are also laboring under the burden of trauma & loss. Anyway, it’s been years & years since I dipped into Robinson and I’d need to read Steeples to see how far my comparison holds!

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Thanks, Janakay! That’s such an interesting connection. I haven’t read Marilynn Robinson in detail (only a glancing look at the opening chapters of Gilead), but I know Housekeeping is highly thought of by many readers. Seven Steeples feels very current in a way, especially after the COVID lockdowns, which prompted many of us to reassess various aspects of our lives, ushering in a greater appreciation of simple pleasures and the natural world. And the ending does chime with certain aspects of Cold Enough for Snow – that sense of stopping you in your tracks to revisit earlier impressions etc.

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  5. kaggsysbookishramblings

    Wonderful review Jacqui, and what a fascinating book it sounds. Great quotes and the language is obviously lovely. And it does seem to be full of much symbolism with the decaying of everything around the couple and their drift into apathy. It may not be high on action, but it does strike me as quite a thought-provoking book!

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Yes, definitely. It’s quite sad too, especially as everything starts to unravel and decay…
      I can see why this has been longlisted/shortlisted for a couple of literary prizes as it’s thoughtful, distinctive and exquisitely written.

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  6. Julé Cunningham

    What struck me about Sara Baume after reading a couple of her earlier books, is that she’s a noticer, both visually and aurally. And she conveys that beautifully and strikingly in words. The one book of hers I’m especially interested in getting my hands on is Handiwork, her book on creativity and living and working as an artist.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      That’s an interesting observation, and her skill for capturing images definitely comes across here. I recall hearing about Handiwork when it came out, but I probably need to have a closer look at it…

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  7. A Life in Books

    I loved spill simmer falter wither for its gorgeous use of language and was pleased to find more of the same with this one. It’s a very idiosyncratic novel which hit the spot for me and I was delighted that Voss and Pip didn’t meet with unhappy ends in the way so many dogs in fiction do.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      There’s a lot of love for SSFW, so I may well pick it up at some point. As you say, there some gorgeous writing here, especially in the depictions of nature and the environment. And yes, I’m glad the dogs didn’t come to any harm – that would have been crushing to say the least!

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  8. lauratfrey

    I’ve been meaning to try Sarah Baume forever. Cold Enough for Snow was a bit too slight for me but something in your review reminds me of Reservoir 13, which I loved. Thanks for the great review!

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      A pleasure, Laura. Good call on Reservoir 13! I saw someone comparing this to Jon McGregor’s novel (possibly on Twitter?), so you’re on the right lines with that thought.

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  9. Laurie Graves

    I live in Maine, a state folks often long to escape to. Indeed in the 1970s many young people did come here to get back to the land, and despite the hardships, some even stayed. Therefore, Seven Steeples strikes a familiar note with me. The longing to escape to a pared-down life seems to cut across cultures. Does Seven Steeples have the feel of a fable? Your review indicated this might be the case.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Yes, it does have a touch of that, especially towards the end. They’re almost in a world of their own in the shadow of that mountain, cut off from the reality of what’s happening elsewhere. It’s very cleverly done.

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  10. heavenali

    I read and very much enjoyed Sill Simmer Falter Wither, and have meant to read more by Sara Baume. This sounds exactly like something I would like. The lack of plot wouldn’t worry me. I love her use of language and this sounds not that dissimilar to SSFW.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Yes, I think you’d like this, Ali. She writes beautifully, especially about nature, weather and the two dogs – they’re like characters in their own right!

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  11. bookbii

    I wasn’t sold on Spill, Simmer, Falter, Wither but perhaps I was of the wrong frame of mind when I read it. For some reason this sounds like something I would enjoy, maybe I am just calmer/more meditative these days. It has been a long time.
    Lovely review, Jacqui, as always.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Thanks, Bii. It’s interesting to hear a different view on SSFW, especially as Baume’s style might not be to everyone’s tastes. That said, mood and frame of mind can have an impact on how we read and our responses to different books. There have been times when I’ve put certain books aside because they weren’t quite working for me at the time – no reflection on the quality of the books in question, just a case of picking them up at the ‘wrong’ moment!

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  13. Claire 'Word by Word'

    I love Sara Baume’s prose, she has become one of my favourite authors since I first encountered her work of nonfiction Handiwork, which is also a wonderful homage to her father and grandfather, who, like her, both worked with her hands. I’ve also read a few reflective essays about her art installations, which are a little like the novel, that kind of repetition of a motif on a theme. I was intrigued to discover what her novels might be like, knowing that writing was her ‘break’ away from the other work, of making things, making art. There is certainly a connection between the two.

    So when I read Spill Simmer, I found it hard to erase the thought of the artist behind the words; with all her novels, I have tempered an expectation of a more traditional story, there is a narrative arc, but there is much more, including the poets love of words and playing with form and in seven steeples, this is perhaps even more present than any of her previous works.

    I had to go back and reread the ending to see what you were alluding to at the end, interesting, it hadn’t occurred to me that there could be different ways of perceiving that, I read it as a metaphor.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      That’s such an interesting insight into Baume’s work, Claire! I don’t think I was aware of her work as an artist – something to check out for sure. Her prose is gorgeous, and I loved all the descriptions of the natural world in Seven Steeples, even though the characters felt a little elusive to me. She definitely seems interested in form, rhythm and motifs, which fits with her other artistic interests and preoccupations.
      Which of her books would you suggest I read next? Another novel or Handiwork, the non-fiction one? I’d be interested to hear what you think.

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      1. Claire 'Word by Word'

        I really think Handiwork is the place to start, I think it sets you up for appreciating her fiction and recognising the thing that her work does, how it’s another form of her art. She admits in a recent interview that she is a writer who writes very close to non-fiction, which is probably why for me, encountering her fiction, felt very much like that.

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