Monstrous women in fiction – a few favourites from the shelves

This is a post I’ve been meaning to put together for a while, but there never seems to be enough time to do everything! (A common complaint, I’m sure.) Anyway, a few years ago, I talked about setting up some hashtags on the blog for literary monsters – more specifically, ‘monstrous women’ and ‘pompous/insufferable men’. You know the types – the sorts of characters we love to read about in fiction but dread encountering in real life.

So, with this in mind, here’s the first of a couple of themed posts I’ve put together on these formidable characters. First up are some of my favourite books featuring monstrous women, with insufferable men to follow in the next few weeks.

School for Love by Olivia Manning (1951)

A highly compelling coming-of-age story set in Jerusalem during the closing stages of the Second World War. This brilliant novel features a most distinctive character quite unlike any other I’ve encountered in literature or life itself. In Miss Bohun, Manning has created a fascinating literary monster, sure to generate strong opinions either way. Is she a manipulative hypocrite, determined to seize any opportunity and exploit it for her own personal gain? Or is she simply deluded, predominately acting on the belief that she is doing the morally upstanding thing in an unstable, rapidly developing world? You’ll have to read the book yourself to take a view! (PS, for the cat lovers among you, there’s a rather adorable Siamese named Faro in this book – another potential reason to add it to your list.)

The Soul of Kindness by Elizabeth Taylor (1964)

Elizabeth Taylor immediately springs to mind when I think of writers who can create distinctive monstrous women. There’s the narcissistic Angelica Deverell (inspired by the romance writer Marie Corelli) from Taylor’s 1957 novel Angel. But the character I’d really like to highlight here is the deluded Flora Quartermaine from The Soul of Kindness, a beautiful young woman who seems to have the perfect life. While Flora considers herself to be the very soul of kindness, this is far from the truth, as her best intentions often cause more harm than good. Slowly but surely, over the course of the novel, Taylor reveals the true extent of Flora’s lack of self-awareness and her rather blinkered view of the lives of those around her. In short, Flora is a very dangerous kind of literary monster as she has very little understanding of her impact on others.

Tension by E. M. Delafield (1920)

The English writer E. M. Delafield is probably best known for her Diary of a Provincial Lady, a largely autobiographical account of middle-class life in the early 1930s. Tension is an earlier book, first published in 1920 when Britain was still recovering from the impact of WW1. It’s an interesting story about the damaging effects of gossip – how hard-won reputations can be destroyed by malicious rumours, especially when a manipulative person is involved. On another level, the novel also highlights the limited options available to single women with no husband or family to support them in financing their day-to-day existence. The monstrous creature in this book is Lady Rossiter, a hypocritical, insensitive woman who lacks even the slightest hint of self-awareness. In short, she sets out to ruin another woman’s reputation by spreading poisonous rumours through carefully worded hints here and there. By living her life according to the mantra “Is it kind, is it wise, is it true?”, Lady R is convinced that her actions are for the moral good, misguided in the belief that she is a shining light to others…

Sheep’s Clothing by Celia Dale (1988)

There is something particularly chilling about a crime novel featuring an ordinary domestic setting – the type of story where sinister activities take place behind the veil of net curtains in the privacy of the victim’s home. The English writer Celia Dale excelled in this area, certainly if Sheep’s Clothing and A Helping Hand are anything to go by. Both novels show how vulnerable individuals – especially the elderly and trusting – can be preyed upon by malicious confidence tricksters. The central protagonist in Sheep’s Clothing is Grace, a merciless, well-organised con woman in her early sixties with a track record of larceny. As a trained nurse with experience in care homes, Grace is well versed in the habits and behaviours of the elderly – qualities that have enabled her to develop a seemingly watertight plan for fleecing some of society’s most vulnerable individuals, typically frail older women living on their own. It’s an icily compelling tale of greed and deception, stealthily executed amidst carefully orchestrated conversations and kindly cups of tea.

A Dance to the Music of Time by Anthony Powell (1951-1975)

A magnificent twelve-novel sequence exploring the political and cultural milieu of the English upper classes in the early-mid 20th century. Impossible to summarise in just a few sentences, Powell’s masterpiece features one of literature’s finest creations, the infamous Pamela Flitton. With her trademark air of rage and despair, Pamela proceeds to create merry hell through all manner of romantic entanglements in the last four volumes of the series. There books contain some classic ‘Pamela’ moments, powered by this character’s unpredictable, fiery nature – a veritable tour-de-force of hostility and disdain. She is a marvellous literary monster. In fact, this series may also feature in my companion piece on insufferable men, courtesy of the odious Kenneth Widmerpool, as he’s also tremendous value on the page. It’s fascinating to follow Pamela, Widmerpool, Powell’s narrator, Nicholas Jenkins, and many other individuals over time, observing their development as they flit in and out of one another’s lives.

The Feast by Margaret Kennedy (1950)

Part morality tale, part mystery, part family saga/social comedy, Margaret Kennedy’s The Feast is a delightful novel. This very cleverly constructed story – which takes place at The Pendizack cliffside hotel, Cornwall, in the summer of 1947 – unfolds over the course of a week, culminating in a dramatic picnic ‘feast’. Kennedy draws on an inverted structure, revealing part of her denouement upfront while omitting crucial details about a fatal disaster. Consequently, the reader is in the dark about who dies and who survives the tragedy until the novel’s end. What Kennedy does so well here is to weave an immersive story around the perils of the seven deadly sins, into which she skilfully incorporates the loathsome behaviours of her characters – both guests and members of staff alike. There are some marvellous monstrous women in this one, from the loathsome housekeeper, Dorothy Ellis, a lazy, spiteful woman who cannot resist poking her nose into everyone else’s business, to the desperately mean Mrs Cove, a seemingly impoverished widow with a heart of stone. A wonderfully engaging book with some serious messages at its heart.

Who Was Changed and Who Was Dead by Barbara Comyns (1987)

There is something distinctly English about the world that Barbara Comyns portrays here, a surreal eccentricity that could only be found within the England of old. Set in 1911, three years before the advent of the First World War, Who Was Changed and Who Was Dead has all the hallmarks of a classic Comyns novel: enchanting, innocent children caught up in a dysfunctional family; memorable, vivid imagery, typically with an off-kilter edge; and a simple, matter-of-fact delivery that belies the horrors within. The monstrous woman in this one is a secondary character, Mrs Willoweed, a tyrannical grandmother whose views on those around her are harsh and uncompromising. She is permanently in a rage over something or other – often incidents involving her ineffectual son, Ebin, or the household maids, Eustice and Norah. Much of the novel’s sly humour stems from this difficult woman who seems to delight in making Ebin’s life a misery with her stark outbursts and childish desire for attention. Another strikingly creative work from one of Britain’s most singular writers – a darkly humorous novel of great brilliance and originality with an allegorical nod to WW1.

I also have a new review featuring another monstrous woman coming up in future, probably in mid-October as I may take a short break earlier in the month. 

Do let me know what you think of these books if you’ve read some of them or are considering reading any in the future. Perhaps you have a favourite book or two featuring a monstrous woman? Please feel free to mention them in the comments below. I’m always interested in good recommendations!

40 thoughts on “Monstrous women in fiction – a few favourites from the shelves

  1. Simon T

    Brilliant theme! I haven’t read the Powell, but agree with all the others – monsters! Delafield does a good line in them.

    Maybe the most monstrous I’ve come across is in Sally on the Rocks from the BL series. She makes most monstrous women look like pussycats.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      There’s something so fascinating about observing these monsters from a safe distance…as long as we never have to deal with them in real life! The Delafield is a great example isn’t it? And I think I might have to re-read Sally on the Rocks at some point as it didn’t quite land with me last year. Maybe my timing was off? It happens sometimes, even with the best books. (I remember enjoying the characters and the story, but something about the prose style didn’t work for me at the time.) I’ll try again, especially as it’s one of your favourites!

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      1. Helen Moran

        This is very interesting as it took me three goes to read Sally on the Rocks. I bought it because Simon (Stuck in a Book) raved and continues to rave about it and I felt sure that I’d love it. At the third attempt I did finish it and quite enjoyed it but I too felt the whole thing a bit of a disappointment and part of that may simply be due to the fact that Simon was so keen. It just goes to show that we can’t always like the same things.

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        1. JacquiWine Post author

          Fascinating! I too had very high expectations based on Simon’s enthusiasm for Sally, and maybe that was partly the problem for me as well. Timing can be a difficult thing to judge, so maybe there was an element of that in the mix? Sometimes it can be tricky to tell. Anyway, I’m going to give it another try at point, but in the meantime it’s reassuring to hear I’m not on my own!

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  2. bookbii

    Fascinating theme. They all sound very good. The Feast sounds particularly interesting to me. Elizabeth Taylor also immediately sprang to mind to me, also Muriel Spark who was very good at the dark side of female nature. Oh and Fay Weldon.
    I am looking forward the next instalment 😁

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Thanks! Fay Weldon. Yes! I’m sure there are some great examples in her books. It’s such a long time since I read anything by her, but she’s definitely worth another look. The Feast is terrific, so cleverly constructed and entertaining – an ideal holiday book!

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  3. Paul Norman

    Cathy in East of Eden must be one of the most evil women in fiction. So unbelievably horrible that I eventually had to stop reading the book! As such I wouldn’t actually recommend reading it.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Oh, it’s wonderful! One of my favourite novels by Taylor in a remarkably strong field. I feel it’s somewhat underrated in Taylor’s oeuvre, which is partly why I wanted to highlight it here. And Flora is such an interesting literary monster. Very well meaning, just completely blinked and deluded, which makes her fascinating to observe…

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  4. Michael Williams

    Going further back, I suggest Mrs Proudie in Trollope’s Barsetshire series, Madame Defarge in Tale of Two Cities and (more ambiguously) Becky Sharp in Vanity Fair. Mapp and Lucia might qualify as well.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Great suggestions! I have Trollope’s Barsetshire series and am very looking forward to reading them, especially given the prospect of a monstrous woman in store. And Becky Sharp is a great shout. I think these somewhat ambiguous monsters are especially interesting as they operate differently (possibly more subtly / slyly) than their more traditional counterparts. Many thanks for these, Michael – lovely to see Mapp and Lucia in your suggestions, too!

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  5. gertloveday

    What a fabulous idea. As you may recall we like to write about frauds and horrible fathers.But monstrous women ( and men) we haven’t attempted. I know the Taylor the Powell and the Comyns, but have never read E M Delafield ( yet).

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Yes, of course! ‘Horrible fathers’ is a great topic, too. There are so many tyrannical fathers in literature…I can’t recall if you’ve read the German novella The Mussel Feast, but that’s a great example. And Barbara Comyns has form on this subject, too, especially with The Vet’s Daughter.

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  6. Antoinette Tomasich

    I love your themed lists, Jacqui! I haven’t read Tension yet, but I recently finished The House of Mirth by Edith Wharton and the spreading of gossip was a key factor in that novel as well.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Lovely! I’m so glad you enjoy these themed pieces, Antoinette – they’re fun to put together. The House of Mirth is a marvellous novel, definitely one of my favourites. I love the way Wharton exposes all the hypocrisy and duplicity in the old New York society. What a terribly harsh environment it must have been, especially for lonely / unfulfilled women…

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  7. kaggsysbookishramblings

    That’s a wonderful post, Jacqui, and what terrible women they are! I had forgotten the dreadful Pamela (how could I forget her???) and of course Widmerpool was something else! Flora Quartermaine is a brilliant creation, isn’t she? Not a bombastic, bullying type but even worse with her manipulation! Oddly, Agatha Christie springs to mind for me, as she created some really ghastly women who definitely deserved to be murdered (and men too!) 🤣

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Goodness, yes – Dame Agatha! Maybe you could put together a post on some of her ghastly women at some point? I’d love to see a piece like that from you!

      Elizabeth Taylor is terrific on these different kinds of fictional monsters, isn’t she? As you say, Flora is almost worse than Angel as she just ends up doing more harm than good with her encouragement of Kit. Even though it’s been 6 or 7 years since I read that novel, I can still recall some of those scenes fairly vividly. The mark of an outstanding writer, I think!

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  8. Laurie Graves

    As we would say in Maine, wowsah! That is quite a list. I want to read every single one of the books you reviewed. Although, I am familiar with many of the authors, I haven’t read any of the books you featured. Any suggestions about which one I should read first?

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Oh my goodness! I think you could pick any of them to be honest, whatever takes your fancy! But maybe School for Love or The Soul of Kindness first? Those are the two that immediately spring to mind whenever I think of this topic. :)

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  9. heavenali

    This is a wonderful post, Jacqui. I do particularly love a monstrous woman in literature. I have read all but one of those and the one I’ve not read (Sheep’s Clothing) I recently bought and will read soon. I must say I don’t remember that Powell character for some reason, I think Widmerpool eclipsed all others for me. Flora from The Soul of Kindness is such a brilliant example as she is so self deluded.

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Marvellous! I think you’ll love Sheep’s Clothing, Ali. Another winner from Celia Dale, who is turning out to be quite the discovery for me. (I think Daunt are looking at another of her books for next year, fingers crossed.) And Flora is such a terrific creation, isn’t she? Remarkably believable, too. I can just imagine her in real life, such is brilliance of Taylor’s portrayal of her.

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  11. Liz Dexter

    These are great! I immediately thought of Weldon’s She-Devil and also to go gothic, Paul Magrs’ Brenda and Effie series (Brenda being the Bride of Frankenstein disguised as a Whitby B&B landlady …).

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      The Fay Weldon is a great suggestion…I have very vivid memories of watching the TV series in the mid ’80s, a classic of its time. And your other suggestion sounds very interesting, too. Not a series I’m familiar with, but the prospect of a B&B landlady definitely appeals!

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  12. pagebypage14

    Great list! I’ve just finished the brilliant Hemlock and After by Angus Wilson and would like to nominate Mrs Curry for your list. Backlisted did an excellent program about this book and author and I hope it inspired more people to read Wilson. –Grier

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    1. JacquiWine Post author

      Oh, that’s a great suggestion, Grier. I do recall Backlisted covering Angus Wilson but had forgotten which book they focused on, so thank you for the reminder. I shall add it to my wishlist forthwith, especially given the promise of a monstrous woman in the mix!

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